Introduction
This was when I was joking with friends on the evening of January 26, 2026, saying I wanted to see what this yearâs college entrance exam essay topic was and try writing one to see what score it would get. It turns out this yearâs essay theme was again about various âpositive energyâ and âpraising sufferingâ content. Iâve always loved writing since childhood. In middle school, my exam essays read like novels and contained satirical themes. Although I often got low scores from teachers for not being âpositiveâ enough, my classmates loved reading my essays. Sometimes when papers were handed back, everyone would glance at the essay section of my paper. Later in high school, I found that college entrance exam essay topics became increasingly âpositive,â but in Chinese society, there isnât that much positive energy. Rather than using âpositive energyâ to silence students and news media, it would be better to let everyone learn to view the world with rational and critical eyes.
The original prompt was as follows:
Read the following materials and write according to the requirements. (60 points) He wanted to sing a piece for the children, but his heart was churning and he couldnât open his mouth. ââLao She âThe Drum Singerâ (from National Paper I Reading II) If I were a bird, I should sing with my hoarse throat ââAi Qing âI Love This Landâ I want to embrace you one by one with my bleeding hands, Because a nation has risen ââMu Dan âPraiseâ What associations and thoughts do the above materials inspire in you? Please write an essay. Requirements: Choose the right angle, determine the theme, clarify the genre, and create your own title; do not copy or plagiarize; do not reveal personal information; no less than 800 words.
Suffering is Not Worthy of Being Praised
When people praise suffering, who has ever thought: this suffering should not have come in the first place? When a migrant worker engages in hard physical labor but runs around everywhere because of unpaid wages; when rural children are forced to work early for family livelihood because they canât afford school; when delivery riders risk their lives rushing through the city for delivery fees⌠some people donât think about how to help them escape suffering, but choose to praise suffering instead.
I want to clarify one thing first: what we should praise has never been âsufferingâ itself, but the dignity and responsibility of those who are still willing to speak, still willing to sing, still willing to embrace in the midst of suffering. Lao Sheâs âwanting to sing but unable to open his mouthâ represents the weight pressing on oneâs chest; Ai Qingâs âsinging with a hoarse throatâ means not staying silent despite knowing the difficulties; Mu Danâs âembracing one by one with bleeding handsâ means choosing to stand with fellow countrymen despite paying a price. They point to gazing at reality and persisting in humanity, not packaging suffering as motivational material.
However, in real-world contexts, âpraising sufferingâ is often misused as another narrative: turning problems that should be solved into backgrounds worthy of admiration; turning injustices that should be questioned into lessons of âyou should learn to endure.â Why does this happen? The reason is not complicated: those who praise suffering often havenât truly experienced such suffering; and praising âenduring hardshipâ can make more people mistakenly believe that injustice and oppression should naturally be endured, even praised.
I once watched a documentary about how an elderly vegetable vendor struggled to survive. The camera showed his various hardships: leaving home at 4 AM pulling a heavy tricycle and not returning until dark. Every scene depicted âsuffering,â and the narration passionately described this nearly seventy-year-old manâs âefforts.â Later, the camera showed the old man pushing his tricycle up a difficult slope, while on the opposite road, a Porsche sports car flashed by. The comments overwhelmingly asked: could this old manâs lifetime savings buy a Porsche? At that moment, the narrative of âsuccess comes with effortâ and âeven such an old person is working hard for life, what right do you have not to work hardâ suddenly seemed untenableâbecause reality is not fair, and effort doesnât necessarily lead to dignity.
Why must a seventy-year-old man live so laboriously? I think this may not be his intention. Itâs just that if he doesnât do this, he has no way to survive. A societyâs institutions and public services should strive to ensure people donât have to exchange âdignity overdraftâ for survival; and social members who jointly bear costs in consumption, labor, and taxation should jointly enjoy basic security and convenienceâthis is not anyoneâs extra favor, but rights people deserve.
Therefore, the question is not âwhether to work hard,â but when suffering is treated as motivational resources, it often personalizes structural problems, privatizes public issues, and turns cracks that should be repaired into fate individuals must grit their teeth and swallow. When peopleâs attention is directed to âbeing movedâ and âinspiration,â some things that should be questioned are no longer mentioned; when suffering is praised, more people will think suffering is natural, even considering âability to endure hardshipâ as the only legitimacy.
Birds singing with hoarse throats is not to prove âtearing oneâs voice is great,â but to prove ânot staying silent even when hoarseâ; embracing with bleeding hands is not to prove âbleeding is romantic,â but to prove âstill choosing connection and responsibility even when injured.â Similarly, we shouldnât rewrite the weight of âbeing unable to speakâ into the comfort of âjust endure it.â What truly deserves affirmation is social efforts that allow people to sing and embrace freely and dignifiedly without being forced to be hoarse or bleed.
Precisely because of this, facing suffering, what we need is not slogan-like self-comfort, but more honest and specific seeing: seeing where problems come from, seeing who bears the cost, seeing where change should fall. If writing can only filter âcorrect emotionsâ without accommodating real pain and questioning, then it becomes whitewashing. There isnât so much reality in the world that can be packaged as âpositive energyâ; if someone tries to replace problem-solving actions with pretty words, remember: one day, people will see through realityâs cracks and shift their gaze from âpraising sufferingâ to âreducing suffering.â And this is the true direction that hoarse singing and bleeding embraces point toward.